Revise this paragraph, replacing all the highlighted vague words with vivid and descriptive vocabulary.

The 1950s weren't the "good old days" because it was boring and mundane. Because of
the way everyone was, there was no excitement or individuality. It was just the same
thing everyday, without anything to look forward to. Nowadays, women and men can do
anything they want; however, back then, their only choice was to be a certain way, and if
they did something different, they would be judged. In fact, in an episode of "I Love
Lucy," when Lucy goes out and tries to find a job, we see how bad it is. Everything goes
wrong, and she realizes she can't do stuff outside of the house. Ricky and Lucy decide to
go back to their usual routine, and just keep things the way they are. Women had to look
and act a certain way, and men had to do the same thing everyday. How can we say that
this was good? Unless we want it to be boring and dull, we can't. The 1950s couldn't be
the "good old days," because everyone was the same, and there was nothing different.

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