question archive Use "Annoying Ways People Use Sources" to describe every "annoyance" in the following passage
Use "Annoying Ways People Use Sources" to describe every "annoyance" in the following passage
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Use "Annoying Ways People Use Sources" to describe every "annoyance" in the following passage. See how many of the annoying ways you can spot. In your response, point out each specific instance of "annoyance" and explain what's wrong with it. You can also try spotting a few issues with formatting the quotes that are not part of the article but are mentioned in the textbook chapters we have read.
There are at least 4 major issues with using sources in this passage.
Here's the passage itself:
Vaping is a relatively new trend that was originally positioned as a healthier alternative to smoking. "74% of participants reported not smoking for at least a few weeks since using the e?cigarette" (Dawkins et al, 2013). However, it has become popular with people, especially the young, who have never smoked before, and it has been proven addictive and even dangerous in certain doses (Robertson, 2016, p.15). While up to 35% of high schoolers report having vaped at least once on any given week, the scientific community and public health officials still lag behind in addressing the concerns raised by this growing popularity of vaping. It is time to start paying attention, or "Can the international public health research community improve the coordination of scientific and timely research for policy development to address vaping? (Cox, 2015, p.2).
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The first error is how the quote that said "74% of participants.." was directly included without prior introduction. Before putting the quote, you have to include the authors name and provide a few details. The second error is how a quote is paraphrased without also prior introduction. Before paraphrasing, you must type for example "As Shakespeare has explained" then you paraphrase. this is the second line where it starts with however. The third error is how also the quote "can the international" was put without saying for example As Shakespeare stated "quote." Then the final error is forgetting " at the end of the quote which was not included in the above paragraph.
