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Can someone please help and read what I wrote and let me know if it is a correct thesis statement or if it is not a correct thesis statement can you please help me correct it. Thanks a lot! I wrote this "Barbara Ann Scott deserves the title of the greatest Canadian athlete because she had inspired Canadians, helped Canada gain recognition in professional skating and was the only Canadian to have won the Olympic Ladies singles gold model, the first North American to have won three major tittles in one year and the only Canadian to have won the European Championship."