question archive QUESTION 1 Correct the following business messages keeping the 7C's of effective communication in consideration
QUESTION 1 Correct the following business messages keeping the 7C's of effective communication in consideration
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QUESTION 1
Correct the following business messages keeping the 7C's of effective communication in consideration.
Revise the following message for conciseness:
In this time of the day, we are sending this announcement to let everyone know that new medicines ordered by the hospital which are mentioned on the list will be available from next month.
Revise the following message for correctness:
Careem has recently launched their service for 'Wedding Celebrations' the brand manager was asked to an e-mail to offer discounted packages and inform of the hospitality it is about to set for. However, the drafted e-mail had a lot of errors. Here's the sample e-mail content for you:
Dear Customrs
We are vry upset about lunching a wen project for your needs that are endless we at careemare not ready to lunch our services for wedding packges but is ready to occupy space for celebrations we would like you to uses our news services and be happiest always.
Best
Careem
Rewrite the following message with tact and courtesy:
Sarim,
I wanted to let you know that I don't appreciate how your team always monopolizes the discussion at our weekly meetings. I have a lot of projects, and I really need time to get my team's progress discussed as well! So far, thanks to your department, I haven't been able to do that. Can you make sure they make time for me and my team next week?
Thanks,
Hassan
Rubrics for error correction answer:
All relevant and meaningful answers will be accepted.
Answers should be in formal and accurate language.
Only correct application of 7Cs will be acceptable
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*For everyone's information, the medicines ordered by the hospital indicated on the list will be available next month.
*Dear valued customers,
We regret to inform you that our company cannot cater to the service you wish to avail. Unfortunately, we cannot offer you yet a discounted wedding packages. However, we will be happy if you could avail of the new service we provide such as venues for celebrations.
Sincerely,
Careem
*Dear Sarim,
I am writing to discuss with you the matter pertaining to our weekly meetings. As you know, my team and I are also in our best effort to deliver excellence in doing our projects and we also wish to showcase that during meetings. However, with our recent weekly meetings, I noticed that your team was always consistently eager to share their ideas in the discussion which unfortunately, often caused most of my team members to lose their chance of speaking.
As much as we appreciate your team's effort and bold ideas, we also wish to present the fruit of our hardwork by having the chance to showcase our projects. I will truly appreciate you giving consideration and providing relevant action on this matter.
